Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Jim and Lola

- Before my poem starts, I just want to say that this is probably my most emotional poem to me. As soon as I finished writing my heart was pounding so hard that I could hear it, and my eyes were tearing up... Hope you enjoy :)

Jim and Lola

Jim and Lola
both in late-teens
been neighbors forever
both very keen

What Lola doesn't know
is Jim always loved her
what Jim doesn't know
is that he has cancer

Jim went to the doctor
once symptoms arose
and got quite a shock
then though "life blows"

Kept hidden in secrecy
Jim's condition was
just as his love for Lola
he hides, yes he does

One final day
his heart couldn't take it
so his death he did
go out and fake it

Everyone was worried
except for his love
because she knew he could fake it
and he woke like a dove

She picked him up
and said "I love you"
and at that moment
he knew what to do

One day he felt ill
and knew it was his last
and in his heart
he felt love from the past

The past is the present
the present day love
and every sad feeling
he pushed and he shoved

The next day a package
showed up at Lola's door
not mailed but hand delivered
for Jim was very poor

The box had a note
to the "love", signed by Jim
Lola opened the paper
and then really felt she knew him

"This couldn't wait
for if it did it would rot
I just wanted you to know
I love you, a lot"

The package she did open
and dropped lovely tears
at the heart in the box
and the lovely beating she hears...

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