Sunday, December 20, 2009

Makes [Me] Feel Alive - original and extended versions

Makes [Me] Feel Alive - Original Version:
Do you ever
hug that one person
feel the arms link
her's wrapping around your body
and your's around her
that feeling that tells you
everything can be
right in the world
that perfect
mental and physical connection
that makes you feel happy
that makes you feel safe
that makes you feel alive

Makes [Me] Feel Alive - Extended Version:
Do you ever
hug that one person
feel the arms link
her's wrapping around your body
and your's around her
that feeling that tells you
everything can be
right in the world
that perfect
mental and physical connection
that makes you feel happy
that makes you feel safe
that makes you feel alive
I am thankful for my true friends
and the hugs that my true friends give
the hugs that make me
feel alive

2 comments:

  1. Very nice, you really show how important a hug can be. the end, when you mention your friends really wraps up the poem nicely.

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  2. Very Inspirational.

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